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by acraig85
October 1st, 2010, 1:12 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page Critique Friday 10/1/10
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Re: Page Critique Friday 10/1/10

I really loved this. Having been closer to my own grandmother than anyone on the planet, I was especially intrigued. My only suggestion is to take out one line in the second paragraph -- "I think they helped." (Referring to not having counted on the angels.) (If I'm misquoting, sorry! I'm new at thi...