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by TheEndingUnplanned
September 24th, 2010, 3:13 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Query Critique Friday 9/24/10
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Re: Query Critique Friday 9/24/10

I loved the sense of comedic voice in the query. My favorite-- politely, of course, because Sam's got a knife . I laughed. I am new to helping with query critiques so I am honestly not sure how much help I'll be. But I can say, from a novice POV, that I kept getting Sam and Hagai confused in the sec...