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- September 15th, 2010, 3:57 pm
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But You Don't See Me Fiction 241 words She could feel the concrete crunching underneath her high heels as she walked down the pitted sidewalk. The hem of her dark purple silk dress rubbed against her knees, and the straps dug into the flesh of her shoulders. Cars sped by on the left, stirring up dus...