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by Christine Macdonald
September 17th, 2010, 12:49 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

TITLE: Pour Some Sugar On Me: Tales from an Ex-Stripper GENRE: Memoir PAGES: 235 “I don’t want to live any more." One, one thousand Two, one thousand Three seconds of silence filled the line before Ben spoke. “You’re talking crazy.” He was searching for my smile. “I have a knife. It’s in my hand.” H...
by Christine Macdonald
September 13th, 2010, 4:29 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 281407

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

TITLE: Pour Some Sugar on Me: Tales from an Ex-Stripper GENRE: Memoir (250 words) I started walking before realizing my legs were moving. I was close. The damp asphalt tickled my feet and the rhythm of the atrium base line under my chest felt familiar and scary. Like the feeling you had back in high...