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by robbina2
September 11th, 2010, 3:25 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 283260

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Skin Games: The Con Way Genre: short story (250 words) Honest. Con never tricked anyone. He just let people fool themselves. Wasn’t his problem if they didn’t bother to look his book past the cover, find out who he actually was. It was obvious they were enamored with whatever their idea of hi...
by robbina2
September 10th, 2010, 5:28 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page Critique Friday 9/10/10
Replies: 33
Views: 29328

Re: Page Critique Friday 9/10/10

Thank you for sharing your 250 words. I appreciate your eye for detail, which is strong, but I think may also work against you some. The details came across to me more as telling instead of showing. A little bit of dialogue or character reflection may help to reveal some of this same information wit...