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- September 9th, 2010, 5:02 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Dear Mr. Bransford, An amnesiac, teenage girl tries to navigate an alternate realm with only the voice in her head as a company. The Beginning of Everything is a YA Fantasy novel in 75,000 words. When Girl Doe awakens in the attic with the worst case of cramps in female history, it is only the begin...
- September 9th, 2010, 4:12 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Title: The Beginning of Everything: Trevelton Heir Series Book One Genre: YA Fantasy (242) The attic had the shape of a lopsided pyramid; the roof leaned more to the left. The scents of flowers, freshly mowed grass, and vomit mingled in the air. On the right side of the obtusely-slanted attic sat an...