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by Terriane
September 9th, 2010, 5:02 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 116976

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Mr. Bransford, An amnesiac, teenage girl tries to navigate an alternate realm with only the voice in her head as a company. The Beginning of Everything is a YA Fantasy novel in 75,000 words. When Girl Doe awakens in the attic with the worst case of cramps in female history, it is only the begin...
by Terriane
September 9th, 2010, 4:12 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 274056

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: The Beginning of Everything: Trevelton Heir Series Book One Genre: YA Fantasy (242) The attic had the shape of a lopsided pyramid; the roof leaned more to the left. The scents of flowers, freshly mowed grass, and vomit mingled in the air. On the right side of the obtusely-slanted attic sat an...