Title - Timesurfers
Genre - YA Urban Fantasy
Search found 6 matches
- September 14th, 2010, 10:10 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Replies: 720
- Views: 453442
- August 29th, 2010, 9:40 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Timesurfers Take two posted 30 Aug
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2577
Re: Query Timesurfers
TAKE TWO
Thanks to the very generous people who provided feedback . Here is a second draft of this query. I am still worried about Cate's love interest being tacked on and that I maybe rambling. - Any and all comments will be very much appreciated. Tess
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Thanks to the very generous people who provided feedback . Here is a second draft of this query. I am still worried about Cate's love interest being tacked on and that I maybe rambling. - Any and all comments will be very much appreciated. Tess
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- August 29th, 2010, 7:28 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: REVISION 7 – Cameron Kincaid and The Perfect Treasure –
- Replies: 23
- Views: 7853
Re: Query Critique – Cameron Kincaid and The Perfect Treasure –
Hey - you certainly have the knack for condensing information and creating a punchy query. I've put some comments etc below - all just IMO- you know your story and characters best. Good luck with it.
- August 29th, 2010, 5:16 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: The Enemy Within - Final Take, Page 3
- Replies: 25
- Views: 8275
Re: Query: The Enemy Within (Take 2 or maybe 3)
HI I've added a few edits ( am new to the system) The story sound great - I'm not too sure about the horse fram dream getting two mentions. If it is that important maybe tell us why? - Just a thought. The last sentence is stellar - I would keep that for sure. It looks like you're whipping this into ...
- August 28th, 2010, 11:39 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Timesurfers Take two posted 30 Aug
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2577
Re: Query Timesurfers
Wow! A big high five to everyone who has taken the time to comment and dissect my lame query. Fresh insight is invaluable. I will digest everyone's comments and take another shot. Again - Thanks - Really appreciated. Tessxx
- August 28th, 2010, 3:52 am
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query Timesurfers Take two posted 30 Aug
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2577
Query Timesurfers Take two posted 30 Aug
Take two of this query is posted at post 6 on this thread - all comments very much appreciated.