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- August 27th, 2010, 9:00 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query: The Enemy Within
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Re: Query: The Enemy Within
Hi OHJ, Definitely the story has some intriguing elements, and potential. I do agree that the query reads more like a synopsis. I would vote for one of the more abbreviated forms already presented. Two solid paragraphs, three tops, seem to be the right amount to whet the agents appetite and interest...