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- August 27th, 2010, 2:07 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Page Critique Friday 8/27/10
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Re: Page Critique Friday 8/27/10
My personal taste is to be introduced to the characters right off. For instance, Andy Webb and his mother Jean... The setting of the police station, the park and the church gargoyles are intriguing - three different forces facing one another. Since it is in the present, No on got out for a minute, s...