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by RitaB
September 30th, 2010, 12:44 pm
Forum: Writing
Topic: The importance (and difficulty) of gestures
Replies: 55
Views: 24907

Re: The importance (and difficulty) of gestures

Thanks to 'maybegenius' for the Emotional Thesaurus! Just checked it out. I think it will be a huge help as I struggle with trying to not repeat myself and avoid using yet another cliche to express emotion.
by RitaB
August 31st, 2010, 12:08 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 283212

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Cassie Genre: Women's Fiction/suspense “Mommy, Mommy, look at me!” Ten year old Cathy Dial skipped across the alpine meadow with her long blonde braids streaming behind her. She held her Daddy’s hand and squealed with laughter as her bright yellow kite caught the updraft and played in the mou...