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by kirstenalex
August 23rd, 2010, 9:17 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Three Genre: Adult fiction Word Count: 200 The thump of Helen’s arm across my chest woke me. I lurched forward despite her and smacked my palms hard against the dashboard as she swore in a shout. White beams shot at us before they pitched to the right. For an instant, a rump of blue metal sho...