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by Valerie63
August 27th, 2010, 4:24 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page Critique Friday 8/27/10
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Re: Page Critique Friday 8/27/10

TITLE: 'APOSTLE' GENRE: CRIME WORDCOUNT: 250 A white Transit van pulls into a long straight road by the town park, I would place a period after park and cut the rest of the [/b ]line . slows for the speed bumps, then indicates right . It p [/b]Pulls into a small car park in front of the two-story ho...