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- September 30th, 2010, 2:21 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: First Light query. YA Fantasy
- Replies: 18
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Re: First Light query {revised again}. YA Fantasy
Dear , If not remembering your past is bad then Ashalei Callister’s life is about to become hell. Confused about flashbacks she’s getting that seem like memories, but are from another era, memories about fighting, or loving somebody and hoping to be married, and memories of dying.[[ I'm not sure wh...
- September 30th, 2010, 2:09 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Forsaken Ones Query-Paranormal novel
- Replies: 10
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Re: Forsaken Ones Query-Draft Three
Dear, Agent A survivor of a dead race of Immortals the race who started it all; Ceili Lark is thrust upon a world she knows nothing about; the world behind the glamour. A world full of creatures that belong in the nightmares of children, and things that should only be in fairy tales: Pixies, Immorta...
- September 24th, 2010, 5:24 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Forsaken Ones Query-Paranormal novel
- Replies: 10
- Views: 3713
Re: Forsaken Ones Query-Paranormal novel
Thank you notw and Fishfood for your advice :) And letting me know that its really really vague. I'll work on it right away :)
- September 24th, 2010, 2:33 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Query for a Fantasy novel 3rd Draft!!
- Replies: 17
- Views: 5883
Re: Query for a Fantasy novel.
Hi Debra! Emma, a Christmas Angel, lands, torn and bleeding, in the arms of a vampire. I really think that this first sentence needs something more too it if you are going to keep it as the opening for the query. And I sort of find it a little bit confusing. "lands, torn and bleeding, in the ar...
- September 24th, 2010, 2:22 pm
- Forum: Queries
- Topic: Forsaken Ones Query-Paranormal novel
- Replies: 10
- Views: 3713
Forsaken Ones Query-Paranormal novel
This is my first post here, also the first query I've posted anywhere. And the first one I have ever written so feedback your be amazing! And I'll give you feedback on your query (not sure if I'm totally qualified to, but at least I can tell you is something doesn't make sense right?) Anyways, so he...