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- August 16th, 2010, 10:15 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Title: The Pious Genre: YA Fiction Word Count: 247 The dress was a shade of ivory only a little lighter than her skin, with short, capped sleeves and a long empire waist, cinched by a belt that tied into a bow in the back. Joan was poised in front of the mirror with her long, brown braid draped over...