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by Kristoff
August 16th, 2010, 9:07 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title; The Last Stormdancer Genre; YA Steampunk (252 words) As the iron war club scythed towards her teeth, Yukiko couldn’t help wishing she’d listened to her father. She tumbled aside as the azalea tree behind her was smashed into kindling. The oni loomed above her, twelve feet of lean midnight-blu...