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by Bleu
August 16th, 2010, 2:12 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Above Average Genre: Middle grades, adventure (250 words) Bleu looked at the window and the frost covering the dark glass. It reminded her of the chill that coursed through her body and the fact that she couldn’t find her house coat to suppress the cold. She sat shivering in the kitchen, a pe...