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- August 11th, 2010, 3:51 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Title: Beautiful Sweet Genre: YA Fantasy-ish Wordcount: 248 Lulu toiled for hours. Her old body struggled to bring her child to the world. And then, the small crowd outside their hut heard the last squeal of pain. Her miracle was here at last. The midwife took the tiny infant, a triumphant smile spr...