Thanks to all you readers (past and future). I’ve had a few beta readers, but you guys have focused in on some different items. It’s always interesting to see what new readers think!
~Jas
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Title: Psi-kick: Red Utopia Genre: Sci-fi Crime Thriller There is no sky in the New York Arcology. In this expensive neighborhood, a long orange plasma tube on the high ceiling substitutes for the sun. The foreign light is hard on my tired eyes even with my HUD sunglasses. The morphing lenses are cu...