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by surlyjason
October 30th, 2010, 11:53 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Page Critique Friday 10/29/10
Replies: 14
Views: 14878

Re: Page Critique Friday 10/29/10

Thanks to all you readers (past and future). I’ve had a few beta readers, but you guys have focused in on some different items. It’s always interesting to see what new readers think!

~Jas
by surlyjason
August 10th, 2010, 7:16 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 284905

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Psi-kick: Red Utopia Genre: Sci-fi Crime Thriller There is no sky in the New York Arcology. In this expensive neighborhood, a long orange plasma tube on the high ceiling substitutes for the sun. The foreign light is hard on my tired eyes even with my HUD sunglasses. The morphing lenses are cu...