Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Dear .... Homicide detective Nick Connolly is called to the scene of a law school student's murder. At first, nothing seems unusual. Just another robbery gone bad. But things take a turn when Nick learns discovers? that the student was on her way to hand over evidence proving the innocence of a man...

Hi. I'm new to the board. Not much to add to the crit's you have already received. Just a few thoughts below. You've heard some already, but I thought I'd round them up just the same. Nice start and it sounds like a great story. As someone else said, this isn't my genre, but I was intrigued just the...