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by glasshut
August 3rd, 2010, 11:45 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 183552

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Nathan, Growing old is not for sissies, as Cecelia “Sissy” Cavanaugh is about to find out. When her husband steals her designer luggage and runs off with a younger woman who has a tight tush and perky tatas, Sissy Cavanaugh’s posh road to happiness veers off course. She must decide whether to a...
by glasshut
August 3rd, 2010, 11:42 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 451861

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Mental Pause Genre: Women's Fiction Word Count: 250 My perfect life ended right after breakfast. “Come back here with my Louis Vuitton, you bastard.” I stood on the top step of our winding staircase clutching a pair of golf shoes. His golf shoes. I’d snatched them from his closet in a misguid...