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by joankr
August 22nd, 2010, 5:47 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query attempt for DIE AGAIN.
Replies: 19
Views: 2492

Re: Query attempt for DIE AGAIN.

Hi Preacher, I so totally know what you mean when you talk about getting ass-kicked by the query. I swear it's harder than writing a hundred novels! Anyway, while I agree with most of the earlier suggestions to your query, I do have to speak up and say I thought the first line of your original query...
by joankr
August 2nd, 2010, 12:07 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 300913

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: INTERSECTIONS Genre: Literary fiction Word count: 249 It was my fault--the accident. No way would Win have not seen that truck coming from miles away, especially not at this intersection, where the land actually rises up a few feet above the flat prairie all around. Not if I hadn’t blown the ...