Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Hi Preacher, I so totally know what you mean when you talk about getting ass-kicked by the query. I swear it's harder than writing a hundred novels! Anyway, while I agree with most of the earlier suggestions to your query, I do have to speak up and say I thought the first line of your original query...

Title: INTERSECTIONS Genre: Literary fiction Word count: 249 It was my fault--the accident. No way would Win have not seen that truck coming from miles away, especially not at this intersection, where the land actually rises up a few feet above the flat prairie all around. Not if I hadn’t blown the ...