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by llBurk
August 8th, 2010, 11:56 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

===== Title: Over The Rainbow Genre: Commercial Fiction ===== My heart was racing and I was scared to death. Why was I being such a baby? It was one thing to be afraid to walk into a new school when you were twelve years old, but this time I was seventeen and it shouldn’t be so hard. I even knew two...