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- July 29th, 2010, 10:32 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Title: Unlives of the Undead Genre: YA Paranormal (248 words) “Can someone get rid of the flies? They’re ruining the shots,” a cameraman said. "It’s Brain-Breath’s fault. They follow him like pets,” Annabelle said. She flashed a spiteful smile at me. “Don’t call me that,” I said, frowning. “Wha...