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- November 17th, 2025, 7:18 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Query critique 4/3/24
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Re: Query critique 4/3/24
This query instantly caught my attention with its dynamic setting and the protagonist’s cultural depth. I like how Mariam’s blend of academic skepticism and reluctant adventure gives the story real stakes and emotional tension. The dual POV structure promises complexity, and the mix of action, myth,...