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- November 15th, 2025, 8:48 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Page critique 5/30/24
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Re: Page critique 5/30/24
Wow, this scene really hits hard — you can feel Eliel’s fear and love for his son in every line. Beautifully intense writing!