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- October 14th, 2025, 5:12 am
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: First 250 words
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Re: First 250 words
Wow, I really like the vibe of this opening — it’s got atmosphere, sibling dynamic, and a hint of something deeper with Kewanee’s eye. I’m curious though: is her eye just a cosmetic difference, or does it have some kind of power or meaning in the story? It feels like it might be important later, but...