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- July 21st, 2010, 11:45 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
The monster stood in front of the hotel closet and looked at her reflection in the mirror. She paused to admire her wedding ring. She looked at my reflection in the mirror, turned her head, glanced at me over her shoulder and smiled. Tall and wearing black silk pajamas, with that smile of smiles and...
- July 21st, 2010, 11:36 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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