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by Harv
August 23rd, 2010, 10:28 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 282993

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Red Scarf Genre: YA Historical (241 words) The beginning of the end for my family was the knock at the door. It was after midnight when it roused me from a fitful sleep. My parents had spent the night arguing, so my dreams had been filled with great terror and a sense of impending doom. I cou...
by Harv
August 16th, 2010, 8:44 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 282993

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Red Scarf Genre: YA Historical (241 words) The beginning of the end for my family was the knock at the door. It was after midnight when it roused me from a fitful sleep. My parents had spent the night arguing, so my dreams had been filled with great terror and a sense of impending doom. I cou...
by Harv
August 9th, 2010, 9:25 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 282993

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Red Scarf Genre: YA Historical (241 words) The beginning of the end for my family was the knock at the door. It was after midnight when it roused me from a fitful sleep. My parents had spent the night arguing, so my dreams had been filled with great terror and a sense of impending doom. I cou...
by Harv
July 26th, 2010, 8:49 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 282993

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Red Scarf Genre: YA Historical (241 words) The beginning of the end for my family was the knock at the door. It was after midnight when it roused me from a fitful sleep. My parents had spent the night arguing, so my dreams had been filled with great terror and a sense of impending doom. I cou...