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by divi
July 16th, 2010, 12:48 am
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: First Page YA: opinions on voice and technique appreciated
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Re: First Page YA: opinions on voice and technique appreciated

I enjoyed reading your page very much. I like the expressions of anger your MC has toward her deceased BF. Regarding the meanness in the way she describes the singer, I did "get it" that she was displacing her anger and horror at her friend's suicide, but if you agree she comes off as too mean, you ...