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- July 24th, 2024, 10:39 pm
- Forum: Excerpts
- Topic: Request a Critique on my current work
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Re: Request a Critique on my current work
What I liked: The opening scene vividly sets the tone of a dense, challenging forest, creating an immediate sense of struggle and tension. Descriptions like "a forest of such proportions" and "moss-covered tree root" effectively paint a vivid picture of the environment, making it...
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