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by betsie
July 24th, 2024, 10:39 pm
Forum: Excerpts
Topic: Request a Critique on my current work
Replies: 1
Views: 18044

Re: Request a Critique on my current work

What I liked: The opening scene vividly sets the tone of a dense, challenging forest, creating an immediate sense of struggle and tension. Descriptions like "a forest of such proportions" and "moss-covered tree root" effectively paint a vivid picture of the environment, making it...
by betsie
June 6th, 2024, 6:08 pm
Forum: Town Hall
Topic: Hello
Replies: 2
Views: 9812

Hello

:D New in town hope to meet lots of new friends and read lots of good stuff !!