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by svramey
August 23rd, 2010, 2:19 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 300913

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Glazed Genre: crime caper (250 words) Vinnie glanced at the wall clock, then his watch. Ten 'til eight. He'd told Mikey to be here by quarter 'til. Quarter 'til. Mikey was a little slow on the uptake, but he knew this was important. Vinnie could be pushing up roses if he didn't get the combin...
by svramey
July 13th, 2010, 1:05 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 300913

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Venus Flytrap Genre: Paranormal WC: 236 Fort Myers, Florida, Autumn 1976 When Mom had a stroke, I heard her calling in my mind as loudly as if she had actually spoken. I rushed downstairs to find her sprawled on the carpet, already beyond consciousness. She never came back. Dead at forty-thre...