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by Perridox
February 17th, 2011, 10:17 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 274062

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Left of Unsaid Genre: Literary Fiction Claudette comes banging through the half door that separates the living room from the Idylwilde’s tiny office. They hardly need it. There aren’t many tourists these days. And anyway, the old motel, with its five o’clock shadow of black mold, its damp sti...
by Perridox
July 13th, 2010, 12:26 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 274062

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Family, Genius, Species Genre: Literary Fiction WC: 237 Later, he would call it a “personal re-alignment,” “the best bad thing” that ever happened to him and so on. But at the moment Zorro fell from his third floor balcony, the only word that came to him was “Shit!” That jagged little explica...