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- January 27th, 2024, 10:39 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Title: Kili Kisomio: The Secret Genre: multicultural dystopian, middle school and up Prologue A Fallen Paradise Sunset sparkled in the rippling waves of the ocean as they crashed upon the shores of a lush tropical island. Blossoms gently shrank from the approaching darkness, retracting their petals ...
- January 27th, 2024, 10:29 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Dear (agent) I am reaching out to you for representation because you have a background in litigation. And because you love the outdoors. I think you will find my debut novel of interest with its unique judicial system. It also has an unreliable rooster as an aside (he should make friends with the Cr...