Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Title: Eternal as it Lasts Genre: Adult Fantasy Chapter I - Ava Fourteen days Perhaps selling her soul to the devil had not been a good idea after all. Ava pressed herself to the corners of the bar as she watched Red Hair squeeze his way out. Even now, with three drinks burning at the base of her th...

ETERNAL AS IT LASTS (109,000 words) is a dual-POV Adult Fantasy standalone set in a post-colonial Brazil-inspired country. It will appeal to fans of the philosophical themes of V. E. Schwab's The Invisible Life of Addie la Rue and Tamsym Muir's morally ambiguous LGBT characters. Ava’s successful spy...

Before returning to the query trenches, I'd like to have someone else read my story and offer feeback. Honest (not rude) feedback on characters, plot and pacing. Pitch: An immortal man and a revived woman join forces to find a long-lost powerful stone for the devil: if they succeed, he will finally ...