Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Sea, I absolutely love where this is going now that I know a little bit more! So unique and I hesitate to say it, adorable. The idea of the character who works in the mortuary in order to avoid her little mishaps is delightful, especially because she doesn't even realize the phycological ramificatio...

First of all, I love your voice throughout and your pace kept up well. I really enjoyed the story. I am not sure just how the Gnomes fit in, but you mentioned it was a novel so I may see them later. I am not quite sure if this is a first chapter or a short story. I do like it through. There are some...

Wow! I love the revisions and the idea is sound, though I do think that there are some verisimilitude issues within the story. The main things I have are the mirror and the fairy lord and lady. I am sure that within the story itself they are well laid out in detail so they aren't randomly dropped in...