Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Dear [agent], [Personalized introductory paragraph for HOT GREEK SUMMER and metadata.] Sometimes it takes a change of scenery and a stranger to get over the fear of starting over. Widow Cassie Merrill is in paradise where the best things—the sun and the sea—are free. A chill-out vacation in Crete wi...

Hi, I'm new to this. Like your genre and liked Detective Dan, 55 and struggling. That makes me sympathetic. I'd suggest tightening up: mention the retirement, but introduce the case sooner. What's important? NYPD not moving on case, murdered guy was rich, widow inherited millions. Clarify this: &quo...

Title: Hot Greek Summer Genre: Women's Romantic Fiction Chapter 1 Cassie Despite the sunblock and my floppy straw hat, the afternoon sun baked my forehead, nose and cheeks until I felt like the cooked Christmas goose. What the crap was wrong with me? Anyone else would be thrilled with two weeks in s...