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by VFarhat
December 22nd, 2023, 7:36 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 157
Views: 164071

Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Hi ********, We met at the Palestine Writes Festival at Penn on Sept. 23 where you were gracious enough to allow me to query you directly with my manuscript, THE GUARDIAN’S MARK, an 85,000-word, dual POV commercial thriller. I am sending you the first 50-odd pages for your consideration. While the n...
by VFarhat
December 22nd, 2023, 7:35 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 214
Views: 220630

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Commercial fiction 85k CHAPTER 1 Dura Europos, Syria “What the …” Mariam yanked out her earbuds and peered over the edge of the dig’s trench. Golden waves of afternoon heat danced with the dust, blowing in from the Syrian desert. “Abu Ali, shou sar?” what’s happening, she shouted. He didn’t respond....