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by rabbithole
July 6th, 2010, 5:42 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Excerpt:THE AWAKENING DREAM YA Literary Fiction ATTIE Her knock raps against my door like usual, at the worst of times. Thank goodness we have an understanding about closed doors, about privacy. “Just a minute Mom,” I say trying desperately to cover the evidence. The knob rattles as she tries to ent...