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- September 11th, 2023, 3:18 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Page critique 9/7/23
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Re: Page critique 9/7/23
The opening paragraph is a bit vague. Consider starting with a more compelling hook to draw readers in. What's the main point or argument you want to get across? State it clearly upfront.drift hunters