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Hey Beth, I thought this was intriguing, but that it could be tightened up. Also, I read it several times, and each one seemed like Reid was having thoughts of abducting and murdering Presley himself, so I thought this should be clarified. Here's what I came up with for you to sift through: Presley ...

First attempt at a query. Ouch! Dear _______, (some kind of smoozing here) The Civil War dooms 18-year-old Cole Younger's life of privilege in Jackson County, Missouri. His father is murdered, their property seized, and the family home burned down by the Union Army. Hiding out at the farm of his fat...