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by JackTowers
July 22nd, 2023, 6:57 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query - SOUL SLAYER, Adult Fantasy
Replies: 2
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Re: Query - SOUL SLAYER, Adult Fantasy

Hi Vidit, I really enjoy stories about gods and demons, so the plot is something I'd be drawn to as a reader. But I think there are some missed opportunities in the query letter. My constructive criticism, to be taken with a shaker of salt: - The first paragraph is not structured in a natural way. T...