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by M.J.Atkinson
July 20th, 2010, 9:55 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 283359

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Through The Wormhole Genre: Middle Grade Science Fiction- Time travel Word Count: 233 Chapter 1: Time Travel Central “Flute!” The word echoed down the bright blue hallway, followed by a resounding thud. Arthur lay sprawled face down on the copper tiled floor. Above him a clipboard hovered eff...
by M.J.Atkinson
June 20th, 2010, 5:15 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 120382

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Nathan Bransford, Twelve year old Emily Singh wants nothing more than to be a typical Midwestern girl. When Zac Zaiser literally yanks her into the past and into a time-traveling war that she unwittingly started, her ambition to be average is threatened. He desperately needs her help to find hi...