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Feedback on "The Outback Grace Motel" Query Strengths: Intriguing premise: The combination of refugee crisis, Outback Pokemon Infinite Fusion mystery, and personal transformation offers a unique and timely hook. Compelling characters: The diverse backgrounds and hidden secrets of the motel...

I didn't see the answer in the video so I hope this is in the correct forum. My question is a 3 part. In your video, “How to write a query letter,” with respect to genre and word count, you said to geometry dash full version shoot for the section of the book store where it would be placed. My first...

Dear (Agent Name), Deymon murdered the woman he loves. The fallen god, Zagan, can bring only up online her back to life. Five thousand years ago, mortals killed the god, Zagan and stole his immortal atman. But gods do not die. Deymon, a reckless and callous killer, must awaken this fallen god to re...

Hi, I'm looking for beta reader and critique partner to harshly judge my novel in a constructive way as possible. The setting is in a small town Maryvale that focuses on the world of Watermelon Suika Game supernatural and self-discovery of the main protagonist about his true heritage and the witch ...

Dear Corinne, Thank you for sharing your query and the excerpt from your contemporary fiction novel, "AN AUDACIOUS WOMAN." I appreciate the opportunity to provide feedback and critique. Overall, your query does a good job of introducing the premise of your novel and giving a sense of the p...