Nathan Bransford - The Forums

Hey,

Can you share a blurb or a plot of the book?

1. Too many names. Decide who is your central character. It can be a place also. It can be Everly or it can be Empyriam or the Ternion. For eg. Empyriam was a land of magic but its source was destroyed. Oblivious Everly is the key to unsheathing this lost power. Trapped in an unknown world, where Ev...

I'll frame my response in pointers so that it is easy to follow: 1. The pitch is too much. I suggest you limit it at: Character + Conflict + Obstacle (in quest) + Or else For eg. Gwendolyn Rose is looking forward to going to an Ivy and landing a successful job but her plans are laid to dust when she...

Dear (Agent Name), Deymon murdered the woman he loves. The fallen god, Zagan, can bring her back to life. Five thousand years ago, mortals killed the god, Zagan and stole his immortal atman. But gods do not die. Deymon, a reckless and callous killer, must awaken this fallen god to resurrect his belo...