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by clara_w
September 10th, 2013, 3:04 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: YA Science Fiction Query
Replies: 3
Views: 1699

Re: YA Science Fiction Query

Im sorry I have no input, but I absolutely LOVE this query. Well done : )

I would just cross of the "please email me request" : )
by clara_w
September 10th, 2013, 3:02 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query for In Death
Replies: 2
Views: 2089

Query for In Death

Hi Everyone, Appreciate the feedback : ) "Falling for a dead guy isn’t part of Santana Jones’ plans, but John Braver, the incredibly charming and incredibly dead politician on the other side of the mirror, makes it really hard not to. When she finds out that her mirror is a window to purgatory, Sant...
by clara_w
February 16th, 2013, 5:16 am
Forum: Social Media and Book Promotion
Topic: POLL FOR ASPIRING WRITERS
Replies: 0
Views: 5234

POLL FOR ASPIRING WRITERS

Hey Everyone,

I'm gathering some data for my next blog post, would you mind answering two tiny questions (if you're an aspiring writer)?
http://clarawaibel.wordpress.com/2013/0 ... flowchart/

Thank you so much!!!

Bests,
by clara_w
February 21st, 2012, 10:54 am
Forum: Connect With a Critique Partner
Topic: Critique YA Fantasy
Replies: 1
Views: 1260

Critique YA Fantasy

Hi Guys, I'm looking for a critique partner for my YA Fantasy (90k words). We can start exchanging 15 pages and then see where it goes : ) I try to work on the usual: plot outline, character development, flow and inconsistencies, but I will also check major grammar issues. I would like my critique p...
by clara_w
November 23rd, 2011, 3:04 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: YA Fantasy: Where Hurricanes Sleep
Replies: 8
Views: 1589

Re: YA Fantasy: Where Hurricanes Sleep

Thanks Wilderness! : D I tried to add a bit more on the boys, and I corrected the small mistakes... Hoping it worked. : )
by clara_w
November 23rd, 2011, 3:02 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query--Fantasy novel
Replies: 6
Views: 1268

Re: Query--Fantasy novel

The Dark Kingdom is a fantasy novel set in London during a period of imbalance (Imbalance reads odd) in the world, where vampires are endeavouring to either drink or turn all of the humans. A noble priesthood that practices white magic is desperately seeking the one person who can save the human ra...
by clara_w
November 22nd, 2011, 4:16 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: YA Fantasy: Where Hurricanes Sleep
Replies: 8
Views: 1589

Re: YA Fantasy: Where Hurricanes Sleep

Help?
by clara_w
November 18th, 2011, 3:07 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: YA Fantasy: Where Hurricanes Sleep
Replies: 8
Views: 1589

YA Fantasy: Where Hurricanes Sleep

Hi folks, I'm back from rejection-land...aaagain. :D I tried to re-do my query and this is the latest version. As always, any feedback is extremely appreciated. Thanks for the help guys!! Cheerios! Dear Agent, Fifteen-year-old Jade Kadeem has it worse than your average Wind-Rider: She can’t control ...
by clara_w
August 6th, 2011, 5:15 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: VERSION 6 REVISED: Query: Awakening
Replies: 21
Views: 3210

Re: NEW Re: REVISED: Query: Awakening

Dear Ms./Mr. Agent, Fifteen-year-old Amanda is inconsolable when she accidently overhears the fact she has an abducted twin sister. (How about "when she discovers she has an abducted twin sister?) She is flabbergasted (I loved this word!!! No idea what it means though, so I'd take the simple highwa...
by clara_w
August 5th, 2011, 5:07 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: *REVISED* Jade's Hurricane New Adult Fantasy
Replies: 5
Views: 987

Re: *REVISED* Jade's Hurricane New Adult Fantasy

Hey guys, brilliant critiques!
Is this any better?
by clara_w
July 29th, 2011, 9:43 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: *REVISED* Jade's Hurricane New Adult Fantasy
Replies: 5
Views: 987

*REVISED* Jade's Hurricane New Adult Fantasy

Hi Guys, Back from the query tranches, hopefully I"ll be more successful in the future. As always, your feedback is greatly appreciated! :D NEW VERSION: The wind is stupid. Or at least, it’s having a laugh at thirteen year old Jade Kadeem. If the wind obeyed Jade, like it does to every other wind-ri...
by clara_w
July 29th, 2011, 9:37 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: Query - Somewhere In Between - YA urban fantasy *Revised*
Replies: 9
Views: 1236

Re: Query - Somewhere In Between - YA urban fantasy

What do you mean by "sending his senses overdrive"? this is a great time to be specific.
I'd also let us know sooner whats the destiny mumbo jambo.
Wouldnt mention series potential, but you have overall a good query. : )
by clara_w
July 29th, 2011, 9:34 am
Forum: Queries
Topic: *Revised* QUERY: THE DRAKE WAR
Replies: 40
Views: 6632

Re: *Revised* QUERY: THE DRAKE WAR

I think it's a great query, it entices curiosity and it matches with what the book is.
I never got not even a smart reply like that from agents, so, you're lucky! : )
by clara_w
May 27th, 2011, 6:27 am
Forum: Connect With a Critique Partner
Topic: CP for fantasy YA
Replies: 1
Views: 1021

CP for fantasy YA

Seeking thorough CP for YA Fantasy : ) Query below, in case you are interested. While all other wind riders play Windolie or fly in Pings, thirteen year old Jade Kadeem has to worry about the monstrous hurricanes she creates against her will. And ever since her father was murdered in a hate crime, i...
by clara_w
March 26th, 2011, 12:31 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: Jade's Hurricane YA Fantasy
Replies: 1
Views: 445

Jade's Hurricane YA Fantasy

Hi everybody, Appreciate all the help I can get, this is my 11 th try (going mad here people). Thank you! Dear agent, While all other wind riders fly in Pings or play Windolie, thirteen year old Jade Kadeem has to worry about the monstrous hurricanes she creates against her will. And ever since her ...