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- June 19th, 2010, 12:00 am
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
- Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Title: Echo Genre: YA Suspense (250 words) Benjamin Gray did not feel like getting out of bed. He was not ill. He was not skipping a test in school. He was not avoiding his ex-girlfriend. He simply did not feel like getting out of bed. That is what Benjamin told himself. If he could have made it a s...
- June 18th, 2010, 7:01 pm
- Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
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Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Dear Mr. Bransford, Being able to control anyone with a single command is scary. Losing control of that ability is scarier. Benjamin has always been able to control people, and he sees this paranormal ability as a gift. Olivia has just discovered this ability, and when she accidentally injures a fel...