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by writer-renegade
June 19th, 2010, 12:00 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 720
Views: 284675

Re: Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Title: Echo Genre: YA Suspense (250 words) Benjamin Gray did not feel like getting out of bed. He was not ill. He was not skipping a test in school. He was not avoiding his ex-girlfriend. He simply did not feel like getting out of bed. That is what Benjamin told himself. If he could have made it a s...
by writer-renegade
June 18th, 2010, 7:01 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 120823

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Mr. Bransford, Being able to control anyone with a single command is scary. Losing control of that ability is scarier. Benjamin has always been able to control people, and he sees this paranormal ability as a gift. Olivia has just discovered this ability, and when she accidentally injures a fel...