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by Christina
June 21st, 2010, 6:52 pm
Forum: Queries
Topic: The Grateful Undead: They're So Vein
Replies: 24
Views: 3231

Re: The Grateful Undead: They're So Vein

I’m new at critiquing other peoples work, so please take what I say with an extra grain of salt. That said, I found your query very entertaining to read. It makes the book sound like fun. I don’t know anything about the genre, but I have a few comments. THE GRATEFUL UNDEAD: THEY'RE SO VEIN is a chi...
by Christina
June 18th, 2010, 5:10 pm
Forum: Town Hall
Topic: The Introduction Thread
Replies: 613
Views: 181898

Re: The Introduction Thread

Hey all! I’m Christina. I’ve been enjoying reading the posts on this forum for a bit now and am trying to take my writing up a level, so I have decided to introduce myself. I’ve never tried to write on a forum before, but I’d like to learn and I look forward to getting to know you all. I write YA an...
by Christina
June 18th, 2010, 4:19 pm
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 213
Views: 116368

Re: Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

“A princess, a ghost, and an enchanted wolf are walking down the road when…” may be the beginning of a joke, but it is also the mess ten-year-old princess Isa finds herself in when she is saved by a wolf mage. The wolf takes her to a sorcerer ghost who is imprisoned by his own spell. The wolf frees ...