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by rish
September 8th, 2023, 11:20 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 157
Views: 1621758

Re: NEW - Nominate Your Query for a Critique on the Blog

Dear Agent, I thought you might be interested in taking a look at my psychological thriller, CORNERED (96,000 words). It combines elements from Charlie Donlea’s Twenty Years Later, such as fake identities, ulterior motives, and a touch of murder, with Phillippi Ryan’s Her Perfect Life in the way it ...
by rish
January 21st, 2023, 9:02 am
Forum: Nominate Your Query or First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Topic: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog
Replies: 214
Views: 1765076

Re: NEW - Nominate Your First Page for a Critique on the Blog

Prologue A sudden wind came from nowhere, carrying the stench of a body I knew lay up ahead; I had to be close. I raised the collar on my navy-blue blazer, even as I sweated under the scorching August sun. I’d been walking for ten minutes in a wilderness park three hours north of Toronto, unsure of ...